We had a few mix-ups about the storyline originally but they became settled into this:
We decided to have a man sitting at his desk on his computor, when his friend goes on webcam and tells him hes found the file they've been looking for he becomes a bit anxious. The friend sends the file across and when the file downloads onto his computer the webcam shows his friend being wrestled around by a government official. We were unsure whether to have the main character use print screen and get a still of his friend being taken or have him receive the file, print it and reveal it's contaminants. This would then cause a flashback to his past where a scene is shown of his mother being taken by the government officials. His reaction to this memory will be shown then there will be a short scene of the main character perfoming an everyday activity like cooking or watching television. There will be a cut away and government officials may of been shown entering a front garden and walking up a pathway while constantly cutting inbetween the acitvity and government men at a quickening pace to build tension, then a knock would be heard by the main character and after the reaction was shown the opening would end.
Sound good?
why not give us some feedback and any tips for improvements?
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